Thursday, January 31, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

Should performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, be allowed in sports?
No steroids shouldn't be allowed in sports. For example,if you use steroids the side affects are things that you don't want to happen like, a guys peeniss gets smaller and it makes a girl have a very deep voice and other gross side affects. In addition,its also not good to have use of any drugs unless it's for medication for a sickness. Also,when you use steroids it's just like cheating to the natural body builders who put alot of work into what they do and it gets them upset because they do alot of more work than a person on steroids. In conclusion,just take my advise and don't take steroids because most of the time you don't look as good as regular people.

1 comment:

  1. You forgot the words! We learned period, tradition, and primary this week. Thank you for making the jump to use the sophomore paragraph during your first week of English 10. You have some facts in here, which is good. You can improve your writing by saying where you found your research. Keep going!

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